by JohnnyThrust
Not a bad story. A little rushed. I know you put this in the romance section, but after reading the story, I think it should have been in the erotic couplings section. I didn't see much romance going on. But, you may change the direction of the characters. I saw that he likes to fuck the women, but he needs to slow down if he is going to romance them. He should explore them and stretch out the loving. I like the story to be there first and flow into the loving part. Thanks for your time and imagination.