All Comments on 'The Girl's Gym Teacher'

Well who are you, Rodd or Steve? You never said that part that went to Mrs Smiths house. It was good after that confusion, the ending could have been way better. Seemed like you rushed to get your story out there to be read.

messages? Massages?

Did a 13yr old write this ?

The story have merit, the content needs a lot of refining. How did Mrs Smith become a Mr (for instance)? And how would a boy feel when rather than making a woman cum - he made her laugh?

Maybe you should save your pool time for AFTER you use spell check and grammar check.

Spell and grammar check - stopped reading so bad