All Comments on 'The Gladiators Ch. 01'

Thanks for reading the story! Hope you enjoyed it!

This is the first chapter of a new commission, the tip of a very interesting iceberg. It's going to get quite epic before it's all over, so keep an eye out for more!

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Not a bad start. The proportions are preposterous, but I can get beyond that. One gripe that I have, and you see it on this site far too often, is trying to use alphabetical cup size to describe women's breasts. Besides it being a poor/lazy writing descriptor, it means very little if you understand bra sizing.

" A full fourteen inches of wrist-thick, vein-marbled, pussy-pounding, toe-curling, never-softening COCK!"

LOLOLOLOL Hilarious and hot at the same time. Gotta love it

Whoa dude!

Incredible story mate! Good job! :) I hope Marcus and Valeria grow to even more gigantic proportions! :)

Keep up the good work mate ! :)

Admiral Squish, this was both well written and hot as hell. Hopefully you continue with more chapters soon cause im very interested to see where this is going.

Waiting and waiting and waiting.

Where is the next chapter please?

If you had some problem, it's ok, but pretty ignorant aren't you to leave a story at a cliff?

When is are the new chapters coming out? Or is it over?

Please continue this story

Wow!! This surely can't end here? Please, if you find the time, I'd love to read the sequel to this first chapter. I love the world-building going on here.