by ElizzyViolet
Written well, such that all the criteria from a Writer's Workshop could get checked off, so kudos on that.
The futanari fantasy is intriguing to both sexes (and bi-sexuals too, of course) for all the reasons too obvious to aficionados to mention. This is an incipient love story, well begun. I look forward to coming chapters.
MLJ
Glad to see you around again especially since its been a few months since your last post so its great to see that you are still active here!