All Comments on 'The Goddess'

Could you have made this painful story go any longer?

In order to be consistent this writer needs to pen a sequel,wherein the male Mc takes it all back, forgives, and starts to,forget how to breathe, think, walk etc, much like many other character created by this author. This was true pos and quite wortheless. Must make the author feel,good,to know how much they are contributing to the raising of societies standards......not. Please stop

The tale lacked interesting characters. Nothing mattered.

A betabux who married the carousel rider before she got kicked off the cock carousel.

Hopefully she's dumb enough to go for it and not listen to her mother, and probably father as well, otherwise Garrett is going to get his ass reamed in the divorce court.

Alas, he's most likely headed for the divorce court shredder.

Sad!

Oneitis destroys another beta.

Many such cases unfortunately.

Damon that was pitiful and that's being generous.

Well I started reading this and got part way into page two and gave up. What a pathetic story and 15 minutes of my life wasted

Do not listen to anonymous critics who would not recognize good writing if it hit them in the head. Sure, they may not buy into the plot, but so what? Excellent character development, a plot I could get into, and a very satisfactory ending from perspective. I have really liked everything you write, so please keep writing!

You let him regrow his spine, thank you.

About time the MC found some balls, it only took him 6 pages to find them⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I may just not understand fully, but Frieda’s thought patterns were wholly alien to me. She wasn’t even really selfish. She continued to engage in behavior that didn’t satisfy her. I got the impression that she was not Artemis, goddess of the hunt, but an uncanny valley representation of a woman. It was a disquieting portrait of a disordered mind.

This is Literotica, what a blaze’ story.

A worm will turn. It is said a person gets to where they are due to their own choices. Frieda finally freed Da. (Or Garrett finally grew a pair. Evolution?)

I agree with the anon that said that he or she didn’t get Frieda. I don’t even think it was about looking for the best or anything. She was so detached that I couldn’t even be mad. She seemed… wrong. Like something was wrong in her head or personality.

The wife seem very troubled (mental disorders) he reads as a 12 year adolescent or some just stupid moron

In otherwords this story is asinine and makes no sense until the end then it’s to late

Even if this story was written by someone who English is his second language then it’s really dad and please don’t worry it’s anymore