by MelissaBaby
Made my day to see this story show up! You packed a lot into 3 pages. I laughed, I hurt, I wanted to kick some ass. Could’ve used a shot of tequila when I thought Misty was about to get shot! Love Clovers character. She’s very human, undoubtedly has plenty of reasons to be a cold person, but her heart is just too big. Nice that the biker dykes helped her self esteem issues with her other too big parts ;). Great story…thank you!
Great array of characters; dialogue perfect and entire storyline outrageous mix of humor, just enough romance and touch of poignancy. So entertaining — will definitely be reread like so many of your pieces.
Nice to have the Gold Dollar Girls back.
Even as a man, I always have the feeling to be really there and not just to read a story.
Thank you!
Omg, I looooved Clover! And I really loved their banter! Thank you so much for posting this in my event. I’m very grateful that you got this amazing story finished in time.
I loved how Clover really came into her own with the bikers. This could be the start of a great Sunday ladies night series. Very well done.
That was a fun read. First class entertainment, great dialogue and great characterization. Well done.
Oh Melissa, what a ride …. Roller coaster 🎢 ….. up and down like the emotions you have throw at us readers …. A marvelous balanced final act and a happy crowd plus happy dancers
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5 stars just because it was a behind the scenes look at what strippers do for fun.
Love hearing from the Gold Dollar Girls and this episode was no exception. Well done as always. Always a thrill to see a MelissaBaby story show up in my favorites list. Five stars all the way!
A belated Happy Valentines Day!
Cheers
SAGE
This chapter is also very nice. I hope there is a sequel. Thanks for your work. Kiss
Again a wonderfull and very human story this time with an stronger Lesbo spin.
You keep being honest with your characters , congrats