All Comments on 'The Gold Dollar Girls Return'

Thank you for this hot and well written story. Nice to meet the girls again, I love the atmosphere as you describe it and the characters.

Let’s hope that you are right with corona being history in a few months.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It reminded me of how much I miss going to the clubs in my neck of the woods.

In a different, better world, the Gold Dollar Girls would be a R-rated cable show on NetFucks. It would have the laughs from all the great banter, the sex appeal of the girls doing their shows, the erotic romance from their love lives and all the soap opera drama sprinkled into the mix. MelissaBaby kills it with the GDGs, creating a raunchy world with heart.

Welcome back, Milissa, trust all's well. Nice story I always enjoy hearing about the Gold Dollar Girls.

Be safe and stay healthy. Until the next time you share a fantasy.....

Cheers

SAGE

does this work?

Funny, sexy, happy. What’s not to like?

Wonderful!

Love the way you make the scenery look authentic, the little scenes that make the story seem real.

Tony, how he suggests throwing the work masks into the audience.

The mask that has to be kicked away.

The way the girls speak to another…

Great!

Hi, Melissa, here from the OtJ challenge.

Thanks for a fun, sexy evening at the club. You did a great job making the reader feel like a silent observer slipping from scene to scene as the evening progressed, from the inner workings and snippy banter to the intimate scene with the M-girls to the fun at the end. It felt believable as I read it. Great job!

Just delicious! The saucy banter among the girls! The distinct personas of each one! And you worked the GDGs into the Covid equation ever so nicely!

And another great read, thank you, thank you, thank you!

Nicely done.

Yes your writing is ART ….. you’re having a wonderful talent and thank you for sharing …… and about the story, yeah covid broke the worlds economy and turned the rich ones into really rich ones …. Don’t how many families smal businesses single moms and name it, crashed financially …. So hopefully the struggle is over like for the golden dollar girls

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Great ending

Nice very nice. I've read all three chapters, the characters are fascinating and it's very well written.

Soon I'll read all the other your stories. Congratulations. You're a great writer.

Ciao Dome, from Italy

I love these ladies.

I love your stories and this is no exception. You handled the impact of COVID with your usual deft hand, well done.