All Comments on 'The Golden Shell'

This was a great story and very touching and still erotic. It didn't have to use any vulgarity. I loved it.

I have read many of Ronde's efforts and feel he rates a standing ovation. As a previous comment noted, he did it without using the f word.

The human mind is a canvas, and a skilled writer can paint marvelous scenarios with words. Ronde has done this many times for me, and I look forward to his next submission

Ronde is a wordsmith of extroardinary caliber. Thank you, Ronde, you've created yet another smile.

Boswell

A truly erotic tale. Not at all sterotypical. Bravo!!!

if there is a better story out there i havent read it i loved every word of this epic erotic story. such a breath of fresh air that it was erotic without vulgar language,a true work of art!!!!!!!

Have read a number of stories and this ranks with

the story about the vinery in Michigan which brought

tears to my wife''s eyes. I have enjoyed all of

Ronde's stories, he is a wonderful author.

Thank You ronde for one the nicest erotic stories I have read in a long time.

Very good use of descriptive language without use of vulgarity or cliches. I greatly enjoyed your story.

This is by far one of the best stories I've read. Very emotional........of course there were errors, probably typos, that did not distract from the story. GREAT JOB

(you guessed it, I'm an English teacher) ;)

All I want to know is which beach this guy combs! He is the guy that we all want to pursue us- both for his sensitivity and cherishing and for his unselfish and earthshaking lovemaking.

Great Story!

Absolutely a work of art. So creative, great descriptions, a good story line, very well written. Very nice work, Ronde. I really enjoyed this story.

Absolutely wonderful. As a man who is getting older, I can empathize with Joe, we know our best days are behind us but still we feel young. And getting that last chance to please and fulfill a beautiful younger woman is what we so often want and yet miss out on. Ronde in this story and so many others hits straight to the heart and mind of people who love.

Every time I read one of Ronde's stories, it seems

like they get an automatic score of 5.

These tales are very well written, and enjoyed by guys

like me. Keep the stories coming, Ronde.

Appreciate them. jg

Although I have just started reading your work, I enjoyed this the most so far. You are so descriptive and draw me totally into scenes in an unbelievable way. Your knowledge of sensuality is incredible and quite exciting.

Enchanting.

I agree with other comments: you put love and eroticism without anger or crudity.

Nice to read from you more!

Carlo Milano, Italy

I wish I'd found Ronde's stories years ago, it's a pity that he seems to have stopped writing, I hope all is well in his life.

It's unusual to find stories in Lit that are of such high quality, absolutely excellent writing.

A beautiful story. Would love to read an ending to the love affair. There is no doubt that I will have to read every one of the stories this author posted. A warm feeling comes over a reader after finishing one of these stories. Well done.

What a gorgeous, sun-soaked fantasy. Beautifully written, and lovely in the way it describes people who like each other and want to make each other happy. We need more stories like this.

Very sexy story, good characters, believable plot, and very passionate love scenes. Good writing.

nice and steady and they found love for a brief time but having to wait a year seems too long....a bit like the film Avante.....where they meet once a year.....a nice little tale and the technique used to put gold on the shells sounds good...but can you actually do it....nice one...

I enjoyed the way the characters developed, the friendship blossomed, and love happened. A very good tale, that inspires hope in a lonely old man's heart.

why the one year Hiatus. TK U MLJ LV NV

No mention of his age, but that really didn't matter, did it? They were two ships meant to pass in the night, but a slight course deviation brought them together. Well told story, ronde. More, please!

What a very romantic love story of two people that find more than just a one night stand, even if the next stand is a year away. The action between the two was not the usual wham, bam, thank you mam evening, but a slow sensual sharing of love. Even if it's now 17 years after posting, it's still worth reading. Thanks

****A beach and romance and you can not go wrong. Good read. Thanks for sharing.

Such a lovely, erotic story. I've loved every one of your stories.

Fortunately this was short because I couldn't have taken much more of this drivel. It sounds like an adolescent's nighttime dream and if that's what the author wanted to produce then he was successful. But I found it a waste of my time. 3*

Sweet romance!

5

Outstanding! I love the stockings and garter belt.

so romantic

Oh my, literary beauty. A great work!

Great story about an all-to-brief encounter. Memories for body and soul. well written, believable,

Nice segue into the sex scenes. 14.5 out of 10 and zi'm s hard marker.

Niggle: Two paragraphs from the end of page 1 - "Mores so" instead of "More So".