All Comments on 'The Good Doctor: Origins Ch. 07'

Nothing like reading an entire book only to have the last few pages ripped out! What happend to Trapjaw, The Corps? Does Rob find The nurse? You gotta finish this man I will go nuts thinkiing about it!

Finals week here at school, but I am currently working on The Good Doctor: Retaliation. Cruel to leave you at a cliff-hanger, I know. Just hold on, check out my Favorites in the meantime (I'm very picky, so they're good).

Love to see a fan!

I like the story but it reminds me of Doctor Who a bit, but different.

I'm enjoying the story. Lots of action.

Your hero who feels no fatigue suddenly was tired fighing his first apponent, any evryone seemed to be bad shots. Meh...

Possibilities lie in the overall storyline, but it's falures are easily explained when you told of your revelation regarding needing to read what you wrote. In essence, what you posted here was a first draft.