by Marijke
after her husband raping her, it seems a bit quick for her to have sex with David, also after it being dry with her husband it would have been painful
They seem to have gone from barely knowing one another to moving in together and having sex within the space of a few days which feels like you are rushing the storyline.
I would really like to see this story continue, It was a little disturbing but is turning around to be a great ending.
Please keep going !!
I STILL GAVE EVERY CHAPTER 5 STARS! I FEEL THAT THIS NEEDS AT LEAST ONE MORE CHAPTER BUT I DO SEE THE ENDING. GREAT STORY! I WISH THE AUTHOR WAS STILL WRITING. MAYBE UNDER ANOTHER HANDLE! TOO BAD.