All Comments on 'The Good Neighbor Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

after her husband raping her, it seems a bit quick for her to have sex with David, also after it being dry with her husband it would have been painful

auhunter04auhunter04over 12 years ago
its your story

tell it your way, more please,

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nicely written and I do enjoy it but

They seem to have gone from barely knowing one another to moving in together and having sex within the space of a few days which feels like you are rushing the storyline.

FrognutFrognutabout 8 years ago
Reserection of the Heart.

I would really like to see this story continue, It was a little disturbing but is turning around to be a great ending.

Please keep going !!

RanDog025RanDog025almost 4 years ago
IS THIS THE END?

I STILL GAVE EVERY CHAPTER 5 STARS! I FEEL THAT THIS NEEDS AT LEAST ONE MORE CHAPTER BUT I DO SEE THE ENDING. GREAT STORY! I WISH THE AUTHOR WAS STILL WRITING. MAYBE UNDER ANOTHER HANDLE! TOO BAD.

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