All Comments on 'The Good Provider Ch. 04'

VERY nice way to conclude. You did well. Keep on writing the same quality.

One of the finer denouments.

ending to a beautiful story, Jane. Their love felt so real, and it's because of your talent as a writer. I can't wait to see what other tales you decide to spin! Catch you on the other side.;) ~CG

I had already read the entire series, but I went back to read it again so I could get the full effect. I loved the slow build up and each coming to terms with their feelings about each other. The ending was perfectly dealt with, especially with the passage of time and the fact that each of them were older. Wonderful story, and I hope we see more from you soon. :)

Jane, This is good stuff, I loved this story. I don't think I would have focused so much on ass but, I loved it anyway especially the midget BDSM scene. Keep it up...you rock!

Finish!!! To the story and the sex!!!! I want more! Thanks so much for writing, you are a pleasure to read!

Nice buildup and nice resolution. I liked the fact that the siblings were older and wiser, but still had the loving connection that started with the haircut. Hope to see more from you soon!

totally unrealistic if things happened the way you said then after she slapped him the last time she cut his hair there would be no way he would ever ask or allow her to live with him he would avoid and ignore her at all cost try to keep it believable and sounding realistic or put it in the fantacy area

Just a really nice, sensual story. Great character development. You really could feel the situation building and coming true. My hat is off to you.

This is the third time I've read the whole story, and I love it so much. You are one wonderful writer Jane.

P_J, I wasn't sure that I was going to like it at first, but it turned out to be a pretty good tale. By the final chapter, you were really getting into your characters. If this was indeed your first submission, it was quite good and I will look for more from you.

well done :)

The entire series: EX-CE-LENT!

That was one of the very sweetest, too long delayed, incestuous couplings on this site.

Jane you did it darn good.

This story goes from one time to another to fantasy to where ever. From too much to too little information to left field and out of the park.

The plot is a joke sorry, you need to read more and write lesssssssss.

thank u 4 the story, what a man...

After what she had done last time and her later involvement with brian by ignoring matt who actually loved her, she lost it all. Matt should have given her a hard slap when she confessed that she chose brian coz he looked like matt. She didn't deserve matt; matt could do way better than her.

I would have slapped her and kicked her out of the house for being such a hypocrite.

I loved this story and read the rest of your stories. They were excellent! I wish you would write more. Thanks,

Johnny

I love the erotica and romance..... hope you could write another hot story like this about siblings... you are among literotica's gifted writer and one of the best in my book

Parts 1,2,3 were not much. #4 was pretty good but was too condensed.

First off I would like to say that I liked this story as a whole, and I gave each part good votes.

The first few chapters jumped around a bit with the timeline, which was a little confusing, but not so much as to disuade me from reading.

Keep at it. We'll done.

So good!!!