All Comments on 'The Grand Strategy Ch. 03'

I did ding it one star due to a pet peeve that you triggered. Whenever an author uses that silly and tired expression: If you know what I mean, I want to tell them that yes, I'm not stupid and if a reader doesn't know what is meant, then they will simply be baffled, anyway.

I do have a few more pet peeves, however, I will spare you having to put up with them. Lol.

Seriously, your pacing here (all 3 stories) is masterful. Well done all 3 so far, and the variety and realism is excellent.

It's C U M not C O M E!

I am ready for more 😊

This is a fantastic story fuck the nay sayers. They’re just jealous they can’t do better. To be honest not many could. If you know what I mean.

Sequel Please

The pop-up over one star says "I hated it." I didn't hate it. It's awful, pretentious nonsense written by an author who has no idea who he is.

You can be the most beautiful and sexy, but not the best at making love

I find your story not particularly arousing - too much head-space, and implausible scenarios about different boys wanting to fuck their mothers all in one story. I did like your chapter about Bridget however. It was different and exciting. I liked the part about your licking her cunt. I only wish you had a paragraph there about you licking her asshole before fucking it. Five stars for this chapter.

The way Bill taken Bridget off guard and using that part fucked hot beautiful and model like Bridget in bed is very hot. He fucked his friends hot mom.

Rated 5 star.