All Comments on 'The Graveyard - A Halloween Story'

by The_Technician

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MaonaighMaonaighover 3 years ago
Touching

A very touching ghostly love story. The first story of yours I've read---I enjoyed this one so much that I'll now get round to the others. Five stars happily given.

trigudistrigudisover 3 years ago
Moved Me

Liked it a lot. But then what incurable romantic wouldn't? It made me suspend disbelief enough to think that what you wrote was possible. Well, maybe it is. Isn't death still one of the Great Unknowns?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Poignant

Touching...

SithLord6969SithLord6969over 3 years ago

Beautiful

Ok, you succeeded in making a stupid romantic old man cry his eyes out. Gods I am jealous of your talent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hallowe'en story

Enjoyed the story very much. Thank you for an entertaining read.

The_Artfull_CodgerThe_Artfull_Codgerover 3 years ago
Very evocative

l am awash in memories...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Put a rear in my eye

Normally I'm not moved by stories here. I enjoy them, but am not moved. Your story spoke to me in a way I hadn't expected. Gave you a 5. Seems like this would be a great movie for television. Bless you and keep on.

Best regards,

Paul

Storm113Storm113over 3 years ago
Good, really good.

First time that the main character dying is a good thing. Lol

rawallacerawallaceover 3 years ago
Wonderful!

I think it is among the best stories I have encountered on this website. Though I could argue with your comment that it is 'almost romantic'. Many stories on this site in the romance category containing mostly sex are not nearly as romantic or stir the emotions as does this tale. I don't feel bad giving it a high rating even if it represents my competition in the contest- it deserves it by far! It's a wonderful piece of fiction!

nadaliwnadaliwover 3 years ago
Wow.

This is a sweet and powerful tear jerker. I loved it.

Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
Simply Moving

I never expected it to be so moving nor so short which makes it so brilliant.

Not much more to say *****.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Very Nicely Done

More proof that a well written story doesn't need a ton of sex in it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Tears in my eyes

My father passed away 11 days ago. I know he read stories on Literotica. I wonder if he saw this story before he joined eternity.

Thank you for the tears in my eyes.

GrandEagle53GrandEagle53over 2 years ago

Another wonderfully written story. 5 stars twice.

FandeborisFandeboris7 months ago

Had to grab tissue for this one. A wonderful story about love beyond the grave.

Definitely 5

Take Care

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I was born in the Midwest, but have traveled extensively throughout the United States and Canada. Currently I am full-time camping throughout the United States and Canada and spending my time writing for both fun and profit. Books with longer stories such as the kind posted on...