by The_Technician
A very touching ghostly love story. The first story of yours I've read---I enjoyed this one so much that I'll now get round to the others. Five stars happily given.
Liked it a lot. But then what incurable romantic wouldn't? It made me suspend disbelief enough to think that what you wrote was possible. Well, maybe it is. Isn't death still one of the Great Unknowns?
Beautiful
Ok, you succeeded in making a stupid romantic old man cry his eyes out. Gods I am jealous of your talent.
Enjoyed the story very much. Thank you for an entertaining read.
Normally I'm not moved by stories here. I enjoy them, but am not moved. Your story spoke to me in a way I hadn't expected. Gave you a 5. Seems like this would be a great movie for television. Bless you and keep on.
Best regards,
Paul
First time that the main character dying is a good thing. Lol
I think it is among the best stories I have encountered on this website. Though I could argue with your comment that it is 'almost romantic'. Many stories on this site in the romance category containing mostly sex are not nearly as romantic or stir the emotions as does this tale. I don't feel bad giving it a high rating even if it represents my competition in the contest- it deserves it by far! It's a wonderful piece of fiction!
I never expected it to be so moving nor so short which makes it so brilliant.
Not much more to say *****.
More proof that a well written story doesn't need a ton of sex in it.
My father passed away 11 days ago. I know he read stories on Literotica. I wonder if he saw this story before he joined eternity.
Thank you for the tears in my eyes.
Had to grab tissue for this one. A wonderful story about love beyond the grave.
Definitely 5
Take Care