All Comments on 'The Great Incest Jokes War'

Great story!

Excellent English — better than most natives. Only a few spelling and grammar variances from standard English. And wonderful story!

Great story, well told. Let's hear how it develops. See her submissive nature come out perhaps? Some drama with her choosing the son over her husband? Who knows but I'm sure I'm not alone in wanting to hear more...

Ah I like stories similar to this where it starts off as a joke, something not planned/accidental, where they’re tricked or fooled into it but end up liking it or where someone slowly pushes their luck. Those are the best kind!

Great story and plenty of humor, my fav. Minor nit picky grammar errors, but I’m not pucking

I gave this one five well deserved stars. Enjoyed it very much thank you!! Really disappointed there was only the one story! Hope you will be writing more!!

Loved it Reminded me of an orgy that I kind of instigated while I was in college. Everyone just kept pushing the limits and calling others' bluffs.

Well plotted and written. Although I'm not used to seeing speech formatted with a hyphen, it is usually done with quotation marks. I only noticed one mistake "you're father" should read as "your father". Otherwise, it reads as "you are father" and not "your father" (belonging to you). Even native speakers and writers get that wrong sometimes.

Needs a sequel

Great story.

needs a sequel