The Great National Barbecue

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"Good. Here are my Canadian papers. Do you need to see my American ones too?"

"If I didn't know you already, I would but since I have known you for years and your mother for longer than that, it won't be necessary." He stamped the paperwork as having arrived by boat on that date. His Canadian citizenship papers were clean.

"That's one of the things I really like about having dual citizenship. It makes the transition between countries easy."

The agent laughed and said, "Yes but you still have to adjust to using your mother's name here. Do you still leave your father's name at the border?"

"Yes. Down there I am Jeremy Elkins. Up here, I am Jeramiah Kinsman." They each laughed. "I am going to leave my boat here for some work. I'll tell them at the boat yard and pick up my truck."

"That will be fine. The boat yard needs some work. Engine problems?"

"No; there was a fire at the dock near where I was staying. It scorched the paint on the port side. I think I'll have them fix it and repaint the whole topside."

"Take care; I'll call Veronica and tell her that you are on the way home. She will probably beat you there."

"Thanks. And you and the family come over for dinner tomorrow. I am thinking ribs on the grill."

"For your ribs, I would miss Mass on Sunday."

Jeramiah smiled broadly and turned toward the door, "Tomorrow will be a great day for another barbecue."

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Not so much a story as a telling of events

No emotional investment in any of the characters. Without knowledge of who any of the players were nor their motivations it renders the whole thing rather flat. The character I had the greatest 'feel' for was Jennifer despite not knowing if she were an innocent or a 'spy'.

flarebel2327flarebel2327over 5 years ago
D C

could have been a true story about Washington D C from all the dirty tricks that goes on behind closed doors

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Not Bad

This was a pretty good story most of the way through, but the ending left way too many loose threads dangling. That made it a disappointment to me.

PhotoMeisterPhotoMeisterover 5 years ago
The 'conclusion' was very confusing

The last section made no sense to me. Was this a continuation of another story? It seems that I should already know the folks with whom he spoke in Canada.

And, like others, I would like to have seen what happened to Jennifer and the other folks in DC.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Welcome back

This was a fun, short read. I am very pleased to see a new story. I will check back often for more of your stories.

Thank you for sharing your talent of storytelling.

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