All Comments on 'The Greatest Birthday Present'

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NapalmNickNapalmNickover 17 years ago
Well done

Exellent story. 4/5. Not that i hated it, it was hot, but because i've seen it before, and it requires that little extra that makes it unique and really stand out among the crowd. Besides that, good work.

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