All Comments on 'The Green Dress'

by ShelbyDawn57

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sis_pornersis_pornerover 3 years ago
Wonderful writing

I really like your work. Your references to a female sibling that was the Princess has me curious if that is accurate. I grew up with a younger sister after a string of boys. I was a disappointment and my other related that on occassion throughout her life. Even to the point of dressing me as a girl as a baby. When my sister came along, I'm sure I noticed, though I don't remember of course, that I was no longer special. Like many other males with gender "issues" I have that feeling of being attractive and desirable when dressed that I don't in a male role. My Wife thinks my dressing is rooted in this.

Just putting this out in public to see if others can relate.

sis_pornersis_pornerover 3 years ago
Love your writing

Very nice read. Thank you. I enjoy your style.

This story piqued my curiosity regarding your family structure. You refer to a sister, close in age that was the "Princess" and your reflections on how you weren't. I had a similar situation. My Mother even went so far as to dress me in the unused girls baby clothes, until my sister arrived. I'm sure this effected my psyche. My Wife always believed my cross dressing is rooted there. Your story also touches on the desirability you feel when dressed, but no so much in your previous male persona. Again, a very common theme in mtf gender discussions. Kind of goes back to the first point, maybe.

I post this publicly to invite others opinion on the matter. I hope you don't mind....

ShelbyDawn57ShelbyDawn57over 3 years agoAuthor

I’m number three out of six, two older brothers and three younger sisters, the lost in the mix is real, as for anything else, we’d need an afternoon and at least one bottle of wine.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Very sweet

And readable all the way through. Nice to see such an accepting family in the bible belt

sis_pornersis_pornerover 3 years ago
Thank you, Shelby

Happy writing, and watch out for that satin. It will get you every time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

You are quickly becoming one of my favorite authors.... I'm off to read more of your stuff now... Keep writing please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved this hope there is more

kriss4912kriss4912over 2 years ago

Loved every word great from the start wearing a dress to going to prom with a true and real boyfriend lucky girl

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

First "Teacher's Challenge" and now this little gem. You have become my new favorite author! {{huggzz}}

little debbie

CybrOtakuCybrOtakuover 1 year ago

Another amazing work! Soo glad I found your stories. -Tysvm 😘

Freebird6996Freebird6996over 1 year ago

Short and sweet...Thank You

JackiemichelleJackiemichelle12 months ago

Great story. Sometimes you need someone help you discover and become who you truly are. Love your stories

Lia MondeLia Monde9 months ago

A warm and warming story. Well written. It’s rare to have a tale where the protagonist is treated as a real person rather than a cliche or victim. Also, where there is some support.

SuddenlyMaddieSuddenlyMaddie8 months ago

I don't remember the first time I read this story, but I do remember it's one of the first one of yours that I read. Your view of hope and love is a balm to my soul. I hope someone can love me the way your characters get loved. Just being loved for who I am. I'm only crying a little, I swear. Thank you. πŸ₯°

huggybarebodyhuggybarebody23 days ago

a lovely gentle heartwarming story. Brilliantly written

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