All Comments on 'The Green Man'

I really liked your well written story, quite original and amusing too.

Inventive and original. Not a lot of erotica, but different and intriguing enough to maintain my interest.

it was one of the most interesting stories i have ever read and i have read a lot of them in variuos catagories. your story didnt seem to be rushed and was not centered on sex but i over looked that because your character seemed to be out of the immature phase of his powers and more focused on teaching a lesson. makes you think before you are rude to someone again lol

Great story write more like it.

Look forwards to seeing another !

This is among the most interesting eroticas I've read. I rather like the concept, and it was very well written.

A very enjoyable tale of retribution for bad manners. A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

I loved your story of the masturbatory bridge, this impressive erection. Double entendres abound I've said it before Max your imagination knows no bounds but what else can you do whilst riding on the 8.15 London town. Brilliant and written with humour and intelligence. I'm glad you do what you do.