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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

More please

kkjr88kkjr88almost 8 years ago
Excellent

Very good start..can't wait for the next chapter

shyintxshyintxalmost 8 years ago

My only complaint was as I was reading all I could think of was her sister dying and the little boy being there alone.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
What shyintx said

She left poor little John alone with his mother and she never managed to reach a doctor or call for any kind of help.

And now she's out cold. Stinking Pete is killing more people than he thinks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Good start!

You should definitely continue, can't wait to find out what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
MORE!

Please carry this story it has the makings of a cracker!

Horseman68Horseman68about 4 years ago
Great Second Reading.

Exceptional story from a gifted author. Even better the second time reading. So glad to have you back with your creation, the Grey Lady!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Ripped off from the “flame and the flower”

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Chapter 10 has been submitted and is now awaiting approval and publication. If they send it back for rewrite, I will let you know.

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