All Comments on 'The Grimey Changeroom'

Get them in the backseat, his bedroom, her bedroom, the couch, all over the house, bring it out of them.

Stirring stuff from a talented newbie.

With your demonstrated talent, we MUST learn what happened on arriving home where they will, undoubtedly, lustily repeat their new found adoration of each other.

Their long term relationship has changed and will continue to do so as they reciprocate their physical love for each other which you will continue to inform us.

Well done!

and well written! Initially, I smacked hard up against the barrier of American English and grammar versus British. However, I managed to scale it and enjoy the story.

Erotic happens when we try the least, mother and son had no intention which makes it so sexy

I really enjoyed this story, so full of apprehension and then they both gave in to their lust for each other. Well done!

I'm confused. They kept saying, "No I shouldn't do this.", Then they go ahead and do it anyway. Kind of hot, yet confusing.

Looking forward to more of your work!

I was not as enamored with the story as some others, but it wasn't horrible either.

would have liked to see the two men come back when mother and son finished fucking and the two men fuck the mother making the son watch

Hope to see a sequel to this or something similar.

i hope you write another story like this!!!!!

Uuuuuhhhhhh .... wowww... such a great story and idea ...THUMBS UP!

I like the way you use your words...

Please do some more chapters or other stories... :-)

What a great story with a great ending. I hope we find out what happened when they got home. I don't think this is over........ :)

I hope there is more...

please continue this into a great long series.

MORE MORE MORE

sounds like mothers belly will begetting bigger

Home is where the hard cock is

This story got me so hot and bothered, I finally decided to stage this situation with my own son, who had started jerking off in to my panties recently... He performed like a champion, so I'm going to stop dating... As a mother I couldn't be prouder of, or more fulfilled by, any other man...