All Comments on 'The Grotto'

as a 70 + widower, this would my idea of heaven, I have poor knee`s so that crawl would hurt me, but the pleasure would make it worthwhile. I still get a hard Cock, and would love a wet pussy to fill, I have tried most things in my lifetime, but this Harbour situation, equals the time, while in Greece, we went for a dip in the sea, and fucked, while watching the folks on the Beach in the afternoon sun.it was our daily treat on our holidays, sex is great done in warm water., a feeling so different, especially as swimmers came close by. I am really in need of a woman`s touch

The plot line of this story is excellent and has a great deal of promise. However, I find the switch from past tense to present tense (which I also noticed in one of your other stories that I read recently) rather off-putting. Please do pick one and keep to it; it aids the reader significantly!