All Comments on 'The Gunpowder Gals'

this is a re-posted story from 2/19/05 of the same name by david shaw have always liked the story

One of the best stories I've ever read on this site. I would have liked to see it go on into the night..... great job!

Great historical details on several levels. Needed more sexually explicit description. After such an astute buildup the sexuality was unclear and confusing. Th final payoff was less than it might have been have been.

Erotica is no excuse for having incredibly badly written language. Forced and horrible.