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by AnitaRush

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NakedinNC_NakedinNC_over 13 years ago
Good Subject

I like your subject matter (hirsute women) and the way your story flows.

I am not a grammar Nazi, but you should print it out and proof it a day later to see some obvious mistakes that a reader will notice.

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