All Comments on 'The Gym Janitor Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

While this guy sounds very hot physically, I don’t find this type of insulting language, treatment, and dominance to be hot at all.

LiteroticaNoahLiteroticaNoahalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Hi! Yes the verbiage used in this story is not for everyone as aforementioned in the notice at the beginning.

dredlifterdredlifteralmost 2 years ago

The set up was great. The characters were (initially) great.

But did the big guy have to turn out to be a homophobic asshole?

There are ways for a big muscle daddy to dominate a little admirer without him launching in a tirade of "fag" and "faggot"s.

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A total nerd for sexy books. Pics and vid’s can get me there but there’s nothing that drives me wilder than my imagination.

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