All Comments on 'The Gymnast'

But a fun read! Thanks for sharing.

I just didn't like anything about this. The dialogue is stilted and wooden. Reads like bad fan fiction. The story is nonsense with no flow whatsoever. Even worse the entire thing is just some boring vague melodramatic power fantasy. My eyes hurt from rolling so much.

Your stories are always so improbable, but they always bring a smile to my face. Keep on writing.

It was over the top, but clearly didn't take itself seriously. Maybe should have been humor and satire category. Just loved it. What happened to the ex-friend though?

Yeah, like BatshitCrazy!

But it sound like punishment, poor guy.

When I first started, I was ready to rip it as another, of many, dumb stories. Then i remembered your tongue in cheek instructions. With that in mind, i read it as intended. Made a big difference. Laughed my ass off! The only thing that could make it better is if you told us how mom and sis made her eat them with their own snarky comments. This was a very welcome laugh, while trying to find that once a day, if that, good story here. Takes out her teeth and gums me. Damn, I'm laughing again just thinking of that line. A well deserved five stars.

Jedd

Former best friend? Is he still bangimg mg the wife?

got a little turned off when pulling out teeth and gumming lol but other than that fun story

so the ex is expecting again.

is it his or little dicks?

Funny as hell!

I loved this story. I laughed so hard, I'm still laughing.

Keep up the good work, write more.

ROTFLMAO

BUT, if it could, I'd want to be the lucky son of a bitch who gets to nail he Ex, his SiL, and his MiL.

Good job

:)

Story started well and in the end it became totally shit,writer completely brainless.

and attmepted murder charges dont get to be dropped becuase the husband thinks karma is good enough

Hilarious!

What a trip that story was. I laughed and laughed.

Great job author.

What a muddled story.How do the cheaters get the royalties from the video,it is his.Also Mindi wasn't going to leave Mike,so how come she is living back home?.

Sick.

Hilarious

What a fun read, especially the trips out the window by the two cheaters. Quite imaginative twists and turns in the latter part of the story.

Thanks, Keep em coming

Story started of well until meeting Mindi in restaurant then it got really stupid.

I lol'd so hard lmao. Nice story. Fuck mindi tho

That was crazy

THE ABSOLUTE MOST DEPRAVED DESPICABLE DEPLORABLE GRAMMAR STORY EVER, TONGUE-IN-CHEEK BE DAMNED.

My wildest dream!

A sophomoric stupid piece of garbage. A fat1.

At least try to make something believable Other than Mexico is a real place. Points for a vivid imagination ,well written, good form easy to read.

Too much.

I like the story. AAAA++++

I thought so anyway

This was weird, but hot! Gave it a 5! Thank you!

What the fuck well it definitely wasn't realistic However you do have a imagination but unfortunately for me it wasn't my type of story you killed it for me for sure when allowing the ex back in the picture though you already lost it when she tried to kill him and he didn't press charges also there were alot of things you said in fleeting moments that you should have went into more details with such as the whole trying to kill himself and how the mother exactly came to fucking her son in law and how the sister came to fuck her brother in law

Rubbish but this is average for this site

I knew this story would be bullshit when the MC did a backflip into a summersault after being hit on the chin but wow I didn't think this would be such a clusterfuck. His ex has an affair for 3 years, however the P. I. found that one out. Probably magic. Then she wouldn't leave her new guy but suddenly did after hearing the MCU was fucking her mother and sister. This story should be in Humour and Satire because it was just over the top ridiculous.

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Fun stuph!

11/10!!!!!