All Comments on 'The Gymnast'

Can’t wait for part 2

Wonderful story. I hope there is a part 2. I'm assuming he forces her to do it live now and pose and spread for him. then maybe forces her to give him head using the video as blackmail that she tried to cheat for the scholarship, and he creampies her . But that could be 3-4 parts too. Great writing don't rush it and please continue

Fantastic!

It's good, but the main part of the story you should edit to say Amy will NOT get the scholarship.

This is what you wrote:

With this video, I'm going to analyze your form, stance, and posture to make sure that giving the scholarship to Amy and not you is the right decision to make."

Good start to get the series firing part 2 has the power to make of break this

I don't know about her A cup breasts in her mouth. I am a D cup and can barely do that. Other than that I like where the story is going

Thanks everyone for all of the feedback. This short story has been made into a movie and is available for your perverted viewing pleasure at BIKINI-POPS.COM. Cheers! -Frank Blunt