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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
typo

Good bones, a little long. Lots of typos, re-work it a bit and it should be great story

lili82lili82about 13 years ago
i agree

with anonymous. it's a very good story, but needs some editing. all in all, great job!

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