All Comments on 'The Half-Breed's Journey Ch. 02'

First I would like to say I really like the story. My only constructive criticism is that you should warn people about the nightmare. I don’t like a lot of gore and I could have skipped it had I known about it. Thanks for the story and keep up the good work.

I really liked thus and wish there were more to Helen's story

Very good fic, would make a great DnD adventure background.

I like Helen that much. She seems much harder and less likeable than in the first chapter. She seems tough, mean, and unsympathetic now. That being said, I am open to seeing where the tale takes us.

Please continue really enjoying story

what an original tale.

This is a good series so far. High marks all around :)