All Comments on 'The Hand'

Having spent many days and nights on Bourbon St, what you describe is not far away from normal. I'd love to be on either side of that experience!

very erotic. And yes, not far from normal

wow that was hot,,,

i loved how she gave in and came on his fingers. hope you write more

Your story shoulda started with the grope but what you did was start the show with a lackluster opening band, that's the signal to readers to go pee and return phone calls before things get going. All your stories start the same way.

Your writing is good, the opening band time-killer isn't. JAMESBJOHNSON

I loved this! In contrast to other commenters, I think the lead-in is appropriate, and adds the roux to the etouffee, binding it all together. Simply stroking a girl to orgasm is ordinarily a relatively tame and minor sexual act, so the setting here is critical, as are the surprise and non-consent components. You may be a bit wordy in the beginning, but I am willing to invest in a few intelligent paragraphs to see if it pays off, and the level of description establishes the atmosphere. The tale is erotic to the point that I, too, fantasized about being on either side of the situation.

public groping turns me on like nothing else so finally ive come across a story thats making me wet like nothing else. Dont mind the embellishments or descriptive writing at all ;) maybe its a female thing to like a little wordy foreplay?

The wordy foreplay was necessary for the building of tension and the anticipation of climax.

You did a great job with this story. Groping out of the blue by an unknown assailant...fascinting bt only possible because she was trapped by the crowd. Thank you!