All Comments on 'The Handyman Pt. 01'

I thought your story was very good. I appreciated the build up and the NORMALCY(no huge penises or massive breasts) of it. Please continue.

No build up, no character development, extremely rushed. If the narrative is, I'm young, she'd older, I saw her naked, she wants me to fuck her .... it isn't an erotic story, it's a re-hash of a theme beat to death. 3 stories, 8 followers, that should tell you something. 1*

How about dressing Caroline in some sexy lingerie, stayups and stiletto pumps?

Ready to meet Caroline's friends!

Tell More. You have a summers worth building.

*** Thanks for sharing.

Loved it, nicely written with plenty of erotic detail. Please continue, I’d love to see your storytelling get a lot dirtier with even older women in this series, You’ve set it up nicely. I do small jobs for a divorcee called Caroline too, and fancy her to bits, but she’s a friend of my wife so too close for comfort.

Who, other than a pervert, accepts a job only to watch the new employer in a bikini and wanks off - in her home!?!? WTH?!?! Who does that?!?!?

We get it - she's friggin' HOT! Don't need to wank off - enjoy the beauty, be distracted, absolutely fine. But keep your pants on!

Everything else here works - good story, nice build (not great) - too fast on the finish. I gave you a five - probably should have been a four, though storyline is a routine one here, this shows potential.

Just stop being a wanker!

looking forward to more of this story.