All Comments on 'The Harem Ch. 01'

5 stars. brilliant. a very enjoyable read. there were a few grammar mistakes but not enough to be immersion breaking. i can't wait for the next part. thank you for this and please keep writing.

Please do keep going and if ANYONE tell you to cut River out tell them to shove it! This is hot!

3/5

Very good and unique start to a story. Keep it going

Thanks for the crossdressing tag, even spelled incorrectly. Saved me the time of reading it, and you the pain of a low score.

An extremely great start, keep following the plot you’ve laid out!

Love a good harem story. You seem to have a great start and it will definitely be on my to-read list. Wish Lit would make Harem stories their own category.

Fun! Can't wait to read more!

Not to gay bashing but if you are going to have gay content warning people would be nice for those who are not interested

love it

More like this please!

nice

Interesting 4/5

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Nice setup. Can not wait to read more.

Too afraid of where you're going to finish. Twin brother is too feminine so I expect gay male sex. That should be tagged so straight people don't get blindsided. If I want gay male ill be in that category not brother sister