by Zalminen
I often read your chapters before I go to bes. I love the consensual harem kinkiness. While this wasn't one of the better chapters, I loved the having to keep quiet gimmick. You seem to find really creative ways of making each scene distinct.
The behaviour seen from Sumi's part is kind of discouraging. I thought this was a protagonist centred novel. Her sleeping around with others is certainly a huge turn off.
It’s a little weird that there is a harem story where one of the members is sleeping around. At the very least it would have been better if she didn’t sleep with his friends..... and in front of him too.
The Sumi thing killed it, unless it comes back as one of his other wives the story just died