All Comments on 'The Hatefuck of a Lifetime'

by Alca

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KusunaKusunaover 1 year ago

Nice build up for continuation

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

For a first story you knocked it out of the park. Wish I could give you more than five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well done, you have a talent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Interesting premise,well written. 5*.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love this story, would this be a autobiography of your self? If yes send me a note.

Lorry3188Lorry3188over 1 year ago

Can’t wait for the next chapters

SmallwandaSmallwandaover 1 year ago

Yes please, more please.

Frankenstein1962Frankenstein1962over 1 year ago

Loved this story. Thanks for sharing it. Cheers. Frankie

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

One of the best written stories I've read on here. Well done! Bring more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Cute ending, hot F’ing in the middle, nice slow build at beginning. Great read … 5 stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

By far the best story I’ve ever read on here. First comment I’ve ever left too it was that good

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

WOW---Just WOW!!!

rock240rock240over 1 year ago

Great story. Thanks

Sucker4BoobiesSucker4Boobiesover 1 year ago

YES! Great job! You did a great job of building the sexual tension. All of the hate & lust felt so genuine.

OdiouserOdiouserover 1 year ago

I can only second what the others have been saying. WONDERFUL. You maintained the intensity of a first coupling through to a temporary conclusion with knowledge certain that they would live to fuck again, and again, and again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is an amazing story. Really hot & could use many sequels. My only question is why it’s in the “First time” category. Neither lover is a virgin(as you made very clear!), nor did they try anything that one of them hadn’t tried before. One could make a case for this as an “erotic couplings “ tale, but I would argue for this being in the Non-Consent/ Reluctance category—not as a de facto rape story(non-consent), but as a rare example of a true reluctance story—she didn’t start out wanting the hateful, but was persuaded & then a VERY willing participant!! But regardless of category, this was a great read.

AlcaAlcaover 1 year agoAuthor

Hi! Thank you everyone for the great comments, I really appreciate them. I’m writing the second chapter as we speak and hope to have it up soon. For the person that commented on the “first time” category, you are right. I misinterpreted the categories. I’ve done my homework now and will put it in the correct one next time. However, your comment on how it was a rare example of true reluctance was very much appreciated. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story! Looking forward to more!

DrtywrdsmithDrtywrdsmithover 1 year ago

Wow!! That was one hell of a story!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

As a female reading this - holy crap! You have mad skills! I was very turned on... wow... Thanks for a really good morning hahaha!!! I hope you keep writing!

pkp033pkp033over 1 year ago

very spicy🔥🔥

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Amazing story, I loved the back and forth banter they had going, the cockiness and the confidence they both showed and then they give in to the sexual attraction. You are a talented writer and this was keeping me on the edge of my seat, it was sexy, entertaining and well written. Knowing you’re doing a continuation of this just has me excited to see what happens next, this is a great story telling trait to have, to keep listeners on the edge of the seat. Well done. You did a wonderful job and you are talented x

Rainyday493Rainyday493about 1 year ago

An exceptional turn on! Wow.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

You only got me for Page 1.

I can't count ALL the punctuation mistakes, & WTH does "All of nothing" mean?!

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