All Comments on 'The Haunted Dungeon Ch. 02'

by unpublaauthor

Sort by:
  • 2 Comments
NIceShawnNIceShawnabout 8 years ago
Fantastic build up

When they finally...got together it was perfect. Wonderful world building. Can't wait for the next one (and all your writing)

JudyLeeJudyLeeabout 8 years ago
Merging.

Much better than possession. Although I don't remember it being mentioned, I assume that she is not a virgin. She also seems to enjoy pain. I do think that you should continue this story. I would follow it. JudyLee

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userunpublaauthor@unpublaauthor
Are character redemption arcs even possible? Stay tuned to find out in the Hades and Persephone spinoff. And see what happens to the Maenads!

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES