All Comments on 'The Haunted Funhouse'

so good lol and funny

I love the way you allowed us to use our imaginations to help build the story. That subtlety is what sets a really good author apart from the mediocre ones who feel the need to give their readers every last detail. You gave us just enough and let our minds fill in the rest. I know when I see a story has been authored by you it would be good. You didn’t disappoint.

Mom ONLY talked to the son about respect/using condoms? Very old-fashioned.

story, Origins! Really hot! Loved how understanding the parents were.

This has never happened to me before, no other story sucked me in like this did. For real, when the mom said happy Halloween, I literally jumped!!! It was so funny, I've never reacted like that before. Still so wierd to me that I did... I know it may sound stupid but I just wanted to share that!

Absolutely brilliant story

All I can say is that I loved it you set the bare really high, great job.

I loved this story, and would love to see a follow up if you can think of one

I have read at least 10 stories from you know, all short and interesting. And all made that they could have a second chapter. So if you ever feel like it, we all would love to read a second chapter of most of your stories...