by kidboise
Holy heck you can write. I’m all in and looking forward to the next update.
I'm so,glad you decided to update this again. I feel like something terrible happens on this trip to the desert.
I worry about Gabe. His visions make him seem very disturbed.
Love this story so much.....you are such a good story writer.....can't wait for the next chapters...Hurry hurry
Maybe this story got too dark to continue? I noticed the Niko story finished up about five months ago (so there is some hope you will come back) and this story hasn’t been continued in over ten .... it’s definitely interesting , something bad does happen for Miguel to end up in jail (I assume that’s where he is in the flash forwards). Not sure if it’s in this trip or later - in rthe response to th person who feels like something bad will happen on this trip
I wonder if it’s more than just the thought of being out of jail that scares Miguel. And why the title of the series ...(unless I skimmed over something in my urge to be able to get to sleep before 2am:).
Hope eventually you get back to writing here - no matter what it is!
Thanks for gracing us with your prose and characters and their stories. There are so many places where I’m just left with tha seriousness when things don’t work out between your characters , although often if you wait long enough they do....
This is so good! I think Miguel and I are kindred spirits. I feel for Gabe. I hope he can clear out his demons.