by kidboise
WOW. This is my first time commenting on one of your stories. Please tell me there is more to come. There are so many unanswered questions: Is Miguel incarcerated? If so, why? What is Eddie's relationship to Gabe? Are they family? Does Miguel ever reconnect with his family, especially his sisters?
Otherwise, I have, thus far, really enjoyed your story...in spite of the extremely slow start...and the time lapses. I'm glad I stuck with it, mostly because Mikey and the Chickadee totally captured my imagination. You are a very gifted writer.
I am working steadily on Ch. 8 and hope to post soon. There will be 9-10 chapters total. Thank you for your interest and kind words :)
A literal cliff hanger. Interesting to read this final chapter posted after such a long hiatus. If there is a way into that void, I trust there will be a way out.
I’m really enjoying this story. I just wish there were more details regarding their sexual experiences. It doesn’t have to be porn but “and then he went in” doesn’t really cut it for me or give justice to their feelings.