All Comments on 'The Heartbreaker'

I thought this was a good story, I still think having sex with your best friend can lead to other problems, just as having sex with a co-worker can lead to problems you do not need, but again this is just my opinion

Brilliantly written.

Yes, the ending was slightly abrupt. Although i can appreciate how you left it.

Thank you for sharing.

And by a perfect place to leave it u mean until the second chapter right?

Hoping you have a second part to it!

And this is your sevondcrve story? Goodness, you're phenomenal. This story was so very rich & intense bu heartbreaking just the same.

Beautifully written piece. I loved it.

What a great story. The set up, the storyline, the conflict, all work together to make this an enjoyable read. I hoped this leads to part 2, 3...

And thank you for sharing it with us!