All Comments on 'The Heist Ch. 03'

Absolutely loved it glad he won, glad he got them pregnant, and glad he kept them. Please keep writing you're amazing.

Could you please make an ending where Alec wins? It would be so nice of you if you could.

and it seems unbelievable that he'd be able to get all 4 girls to be sex slaves for himself and his bodyguards. BTW, the news article never mentioned what happened to Ethan ???

Once you enter the Master/Slave dynamic, and get the new setting settled, that is where you should further develop the story regarding the psyches, feelings, thoughts of the heroines and the role they are forced to play. Aren't they the heroines? You can write well and titillate with the sex action parts, challenge yourself and write a story with many chapters dealing with the heroines's point of view too and with a long term view towards an actual resolution! Please try it.Don't end it here. Take Care.