All Comments on 'The Hell in Your Eyes Ch. 10'

I am completely obsessed with this story, and Jack!

Same, Anon. Hoping our dear author is well and aware of the devotion of a few of her readers.

So obsessed I love how this author writes, I’m like you guys I keep coming back ….

Keeping hope alive!

I have come back every year since first reading this story in 2011 to see if it's finished. One of my absolute favorite erotic stories

Cleaning up some candle wax...

Nooooo 😭 This story is too good to be left unfinished!! PLEASE finish it!

Found some candles! Someone's gotta keep hope alive.

Please continue this😭

Too bad I was looking forward to the downfall of Jack watching him spin out of control get arrested/killed/commit suicide.

To person below he wasnt lowkey abusive - he was abusive in every single way imaginable. He never experienced any character growth what soever. Even when he said he wanted to be good it was just a facade to control her and he would just rape her again the second she refused.

Was looking forward to some " I spit on your grave " style revenge oh well

@anonymous Who knows? At this point... It's either account abandonment, or something far more unfortunate has happened. Still, keeping the candle lit. Of all the authors and stories to keep an eye on, I chose this one and their story, seeming unfinished, and hoping for some kind of resolution. However, I'd settle for some sign of life from the author...

Why does this story remain unfinished? Did the author die?

Walmart had a sale on candles. So I'm back, with matches and lighters to spare.

came back to check only to b disappointed again :( pls complete the series its been long enough

I’ve come back to this website since 2016 just to check for new chapter. 6/7 years! I get my hopes up every time. I wonder when i’ll stop. :(

Still keeping the candle lit.

why are good stories always left incomplete? pls complete it i need a conclusion to it, its just too good

Keeping the candles lit. Hope the author is okay.

I need more chapters we need to see how it goes

Hoping for some closure.

Not every story has a nice happy ending, people need to realise this.

Ngl, I agree with the ones saying this is an OK ending if it was a closure type of thing.

Jack lowkey abusive and the plot was well put together (Esp when her dad got a pay raise bc Jack is his effin boss!) But I kinda think Sam x Jane or the science guy woulda been cute, esp if Jane/Science guy learned about Jack and went to great lengths to protect her and possibly Sam getting a trauma based kink since this is Literotica.

Idk what the rules say but 100% would love to see someone (while giving credit to OP) rewrite the entire thing, ending included.

I STAYED UP ALL NIGHT READING AND THIS-

Ima cry

Why! Why why why do I always fall in love with stories that aren’t finished. Ahhhh I need to know what happens 🤣🤣🤣

Oh no!!! Please write more! I just want to know how it ends!! 😭😭😭

What the hell!!! Its been 8 years and nothing!?!? Fuck!

Anyone interesting in trying to write their own interpretation of a conclusion to this story?

I agree to the comment before me. This was hot but Sam deserves better and Jack deserves to suffer. At this point of the story, this is an appropriate ending.

I wouldn't mind if this is the ending, Sam deserves better. Jack can spend the rest of his miserable life alone.

Not me thinking chapter 10 was the last one because she hadn’t updated in years 🤡

WHAT THE FUCK.

But anyway, I’m glad she wasn’t putty and dolling out promises.

Back to what I was saying—

WHAT THE FUCK

I kinda relate to this difference is I'm 14, he's 34. We haven't met but he's sorta like this lol

This is the best story on the entire site! Oh God please post the next chapter!

Hoping and praying.

Oh no! WHERE'S THE NEXT PART???

Glad to see people commenting in here continuously, its the best series i have read on this site

I would be glad if someone recommended something has the same quality, i am tired of searching

I really hope at some point you come back and finish this story.

Amazing story. Soooo hot. I do not envy your dilemma of what comes next but I want it soooo badly. I hope you are doing well and that it is not life that has stopped you from writing.

Been hoping and praying for a sweet, satisfying conclusion to this story. I really want to see them together, against all odds. I hope all is well in your life, dear author, that one day you will take up the pen again!

So.. anyone else starting reading this story back in 2017 and check back on it about every 6 months to see if she’s posted any updates? Best of wishes to you. Hope all is well and you are doing okay :)

Really loved this story, I ended up reading it twice. Exactly what I was looking for. Hope you find the inspiration and motivation to keep it going eventually. You could even have it pick up after a year or two of time has passed and she's in college and just got a boyfriend or something and it sets him off to come back into her life.

Sometimes creative work is just an product of where we're at in our lives currently though and things happen so it's hard to recreate later or just isn't as fulfilling as you grow and change. Everyone can just use their imaginations to conclude the story how they'd like if that's the case for you.

I LOVE THE STORY.

APPARNTLEY YOU STOPPED WRITING IT. PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE IT. WRITE ANOTHER CHPATER PLEASE. I REALLY NEED TO KNOW IF JACK AND SAM ARE GONNA BE OKAY. TOO MUCH CLIFFHANDER, YOU CAN'T END IT LIKE THIS.

Would love to see a new chapter posted! This story is so good.

This is the only serialized story I have actually followed all of the way through. It is so good. Powerful, inciteful, well written... and then we come to an end that is not an ending..... I know what i want to happen, i can taste it. But i need to know where the author is taking this. You have my heart in your hands TwistedMisery, help me?

Too good to leave us hanging! Please finish this story...this is the literal climax of the whole thing, so I am dying here!

Please, for the love of God, don't leave us hanging!! Would be nice if Sam could forgive Jack and they ended up together!

Aww no...the moon person stopped commenting😢

Also I hope youre keeping well twistedmisery, btw any ending you put out will be loved❤

I hope the writer finds herself back in a space where she can return to this piece, get Sam and Jack back into focus, and finish their story. I hope.

Please finish this story

Arrrrgggghhhh!! I really wish there was a way to mark stories as abandoned w/o an ending so that others don’t get their hopes up. 😭 I really want to know how it ended.

This story has been 10 chapters of perfection in a genre where it's few and far between... I realize it's been years, but just know that when you're ready to return to Jack and Sam, we're anxiously waiting!

Will there be a ch.11? This is such a great story

Just in case you're wondering if anyone is still interested - hell. yes.

Please, please come back and continue!!!!

I know you haven't updated in a really long time, but PLEASE DO!!! Omg I can just tell it's about to get really good, please continue this series

Merry Christmas twistedmisery, I’ve been a fan since 2016 and I hope to hear from you in the new year!

Omg you talented author! Where are you!? How are you? What do you eat to come up with such talented work! This is by far the best built of a story where i am actually endeared by a psychopath a Rapist!!! This is so sinfully twisted. But i am totally rooting for a happy ending for them. So please give it proper closure or atleast say you wont be updating anymore. As much as i can understand someotimes you aren't in a good place where you mind can function so i hope ehatever dilemma your facing goes away. But also please consider that waiting for something you like, a story you have grown attached to is equally painful. Thank you, take care

Listen... I know you haven’t uploaded in a good long while... but please.... I need to k n o w what happens next..... I love this soooo much TT^TT I’m dyingggg

I was so excited to wait for the next chapter until my eyes grazed over the date it was last updated and I think my little heart withered a bit. I thought i’d get over it but it’s been a good few days and well... I’m not

I know you haven't updated in a few years but I love this story

Please finish it!!!!

36th🌙...

She's bound, trussed up and gagged with bells and whistles coming your way. I hope my muse will be able to help you create another lovely chapter.

Reading your stories makes me feel alive.

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I see you updated the bio. I love that. I am happy to see. please please update this.

Just wanted to check if you will updating this story or are you done with it? Please let us know.

She should escape him.

More please!!!

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Since I am no longer checking, I just thought you should know that I love it when Jack gets mad. In the scene in the chapter before this where Jack asks Sam if she really wants to play this game after she asks what he would have done if she did kiss him, I found Jack's reaction really hot

For the past 3 or so years I have checked to see if you've updated the story and everyday I have been left disappointed. I would just like to say that I am officially giving up on this and I am no longer going to check if you have updated it. It is by far the greatest story on Literotica. I completely understand that you are going through a difficult time, and all of us readers have been so supportive. But it has been over a year since you last updated us on your whereabouts and I really think it is unfair that you have left us hanging. It is not enough to simply just say that you won't stop writing. We worry about you :(. I am tired of waiting and I am disappointed that I will just have to come up with an ending for this story for myself. Thank you for everything you have written, it has been an honor to follow along Jack and Sam's story

This is by far, the best story I've read on here. I check for updates obsessively. I hope the author will eventually finish the story, but with the rough time she was having, I understand if she doesn't, or can't.

T.M., I'm so sorry for your loss and difficult times. I hope that things are going better for you, and even if you don't finish the story, I hope you're able to use your talent and creativity to heal♡♡♡

O shit... for real it's left without an end! Sigh

The best read so far. It need a lot of skill ti make a dangerous psycho as Jack a... likeable character! Congratulation

The story is so close to the end I wish you would finish it

In the year 2019 so many 🌙 🌙 🌙 have passed and the readers wait...they wait for Jack.

Omg you have to finish this story. It’s amazing

Kills me that the story has no ending! Please finish it!

28th🌛...

27th🌛...

She meant it's the 26th moon dude

Counting moon lady what do you mean by the 26th?

26th 🌛...

I hope you get your groove back and on a secondary note I wish you could finish this story... longest cliff hanger of my life 😂😂 i always come back and reread it from the beginning.

Hello! I am a total geek for your hot story! It's very well written and I never know what is going to happen next! I really hope you decide to continue it ! Thank you and best wishes! (:

Wow! I've never seen a story deteriorate so badly! At least I don't have to worry about checking back anymore!

Dear anonymous, thank you for hoping than I am ok, I indeed am ( just having a break).

25th 🌛...

Hot story indeed, and the writing style is decent as well. But a grown man in his 30s chasing a high school pupil? How can that be appropriate? This is child abuse, pure and simple. Any parent would be horrified to imagine their own offspring in this young girl’s shoes. But this is a fantasy...thank God for that.

Wait where's the counting moons person? I hope he/she is okay.

@twistedmisery please finish the story, I don't wanna give up on it as well, it's my favourite and you're awesome.

You know I never thought of it like that but you do make a good point. I am sorry twisted misery if this is something you have been through or if this is based off a true event. I know the value of writing down events to feel better. This story is truly compelling and I hope you continue to write it.

I really like Jack here. The way describe him in his frustration and anger. It was very well written. Hope to read 11 soon.

This is a study of human behavior bearing on the obsessive yes it is well written, yes it has the ring of truth about it, that I always look for in any fiction, but it is also very disturbing, and I sincerely hope it is not based on anyone's real life experiences. There is real pain here and I feel that must be the reason we have heard nothing from TM for four years.

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I love this story so much, I love the dynamics between Jack and Sam, the character progression and that your style of writing hasn't wavered throughout this story, which keeps it cohesive. I find a lot of eroticas can't do that and a lot of eroticas just skip to the sex without having an actual story.

It's understandable that you can't do it right now due to what you're going through but, I hope you feel better soon and feel inspired to write again. Can't wait to see how this will conclude ^_^

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To the anonymous poster who literally is hounding TM who has been explicitly clear that she has gone through a truly horrific time grow up! Yes we all love this story but reality check yourself ASAP! All your posts are just me me me and it’s spoiling you it for everyone. TM has lost someone and all you can do is whine...get your priorities straight because you seem cold and callous.

If you have decided not to finish writing this story maybe you could just post a comment or something about what your initial plans for how it would all end were? Just for a little closure? Just a thought.

Two years Twisted Misery, two years. If you are not going to do it stop giving us false hope by making comments. Put all your rage in the ending and don’t hold back but please just give us something.

I need more of this story!!! Please more installments

Can someone just finish the story since she's incapable of doing it herself?

Did you quit smoking? I quit smoking and haven’t been able to write since. Really pisses me off. I start, get a few pages going and then boom brain has turned off and I can’t get the thread started. It’s been several years since I quit and I probably have 30 or more stories that are roughly outlined but no ending, or first few chapters and nothing else. When I was smoking...I could sit for HOURS typing away, became obsessed. So I’m thinking you quit smoking and now your writing muse, having been fed by cigarettes, has died.

I’m really intensely curious to see how you’re going to wrap up this totally twisted relationship. So I hope you find another muse who lives on caffeine like all good muses are supposed to.

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Can not wait for next installment these are great!!!

TM please tell us when are you going to get back to writing. PLEASE!!