All Comments on 'The Hidden Room'

This was a great story!!! Thank you!! I'm looking forward to a continuation of this story.

Very good, please continue.

But -- for my taste at least -- there wasn't enough ACTUAL sex, and the sex that there was wasn't presented erotically, much too matter-of-fact.

I enjoyed your story.

Really enjoyed this. Keep it up

Great story! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Well written and carefully crafted with well developed characters that you feel you know by the end. Enough surprises to keep the tension rolling. Very sensuous and sexy as well.

You mentioned a Nikon D850. It kind of throws the timeline off. I shoot a D750, D7500 and a D500. The D850 just hit the market this year. Great camera! Other than that, it was a very entertaining read.

Although I'm not so much into whipping I dig your story. It feels like being in the Den myself and enjoy watching all the action. A really nice read and stroke! Thank you very much!!

I liked this story a lot. Wish I had a "Den" like yours.

More please.

Liked it, and him and Toni and the other girls...

Not into the bdsm, and def not into doing it till welts raised...know it's a limey thing....

But sex is too fast and too mechanical. No slow buildup. No step by step. No discussion between the partners of what they wanted, or what they wanted their partner to do to them. No teasing. Really missing eroticism.

Gave it three stars.

I was excitedly awaiting the sex he was gonna have with toni

I enjoyed your story and am glad you were aware of the grammar..it was my only criticism of the writing. Like others I personally don't like hurting someone else but it was your story and it flowed well. A.F.C. Somerset.

Interesting story. I love the idea of finding he treasure/uh ... lotto winnings. Good plot, and sexy.

One of the best I've read in a long time. Great characters and storyline. Definately needs a second chapter!

I liked the idea very much, though did wonder if it all became too complicated in the detailed working out of how everything worked. Where Peter got the money, how he arranged for all the security cameras and getting access to them and so on. Perhaps also there were far too many characters with no slow build up of access to them. I rather agreed with 'anonymous' on the sex being too fast and too mechanical.

I liked the comment by roverone that the welts raised was a 'limey thing' when clearly the author is not British. £100 bills indeed! The maximum the Bank of England issues are £50 'notes.' 'Fanny' for bottom is not UK usage and so on. Mind you, I dread to think what errors I'd make if writing a story set in the US!

I thought having Toni discover the den was unnecessary,

I seem to be rather negative about this story. Clearly from the score others have found it very much to their liking!

I can't believe I'm about to write this, but maybe a little less sex. What I mean is more build up and anticipation. Take your time. I suspect that's what Drmaxc had in mind with the comment about the sex being too fast. That said, I gave you a 5 and am really hoping for another chapter because the set up is so delicious and I really did enjoy your story!

Loved the story! So erotic. The camera idea has been a long fantasy of mine.

Thank you for you story, I loved it. I loved that you let emma say, no sluts here. I think it's such a let down when they start insulting each other...

The only thing to make it it better, is adding another chapter. Which probably is difficult, because you would need to come up with totally new scenarios, to not make it just a repeat...

should really be a six!! great build up and story line, rounding out nicely at the end

agree with the last comment. Good story with a proper ending unlike a lot of others that just produce chapter after chapter. got a five form me!

Loved it, Being a voyeur myself this can only happen in anyone's dreams.

Thank you for the story and looking forward to more

THE HIDDEN ROOM

I loved this story

I do loved the idea of being watched and it makes me so aroused when I know I have a voyeur seeing me.

Lucky for me my husband loves it when I show off to it has happened a few times

Wow!! Great story!! I loved it!! I think it would make a great movie..

Read this one a number of times. Never get old.