All Comments on 'The Hiding Game Ch. 03'

by fieryjen

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
keeping better..

I'm eagerly waiting next chapter... please don't make them another jerk and bimbo. I'd like to know more about him. Thanks.

Dancewithme2Dancewithme2over 15 years ago
The Plot Thickens

Seems like Seth is showing signs of caring and having to face the reality that love comes with a price. Definitely well written.

The interaction between the two girlfriends is well done too.

A light yet clear, steamy, dreamy chapter that I really enjoyed.

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