by SeanBurns1975
A great start, please add more to this story, also longer chapters.
I always know when I am enjoying a story, because my mind slows to absorb every word, rather than rushing over paragraphs. Very emotive and a different tack from the norm, which I find refreshing . I look forward to reading more of your submissions.
Well-written, engaging characters, and intriguing...the tangled webs are always the best.
Thank you for sharing.