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All Comments on 'The Hitchhikers Ch. 01'

by Tampa1905

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Don't bother

continuing.......

sketty_langlandsketty_langlandabout 12 years ago
Before your next submission...

... you really need to get an editor. A couple of examples:

You have spelling errors that spell check won't catch.

If he was going to give them a ride for an hour, why are they still with him after two hours?

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