All Comments on 'The Hive'

This very different from the usual 'insect' types. I love the originality and the fact that you interwoven several other concepts into it like Soul mates for that's what it appear to me.

I think this is worthy of a second chapter

It was a really good story, but the taking over over another person for the benefit of another seems cruel to me. Your main character and her friend didn't even have a choice, I wonder can't more writers have stories that are good but not have the subjugation of characters.

I was totally aroused, excited, amused, frightened, and breathless. This should definitely be followed with more.

This is the very first story I have ever commented on and I'm doing this for one reason. This story is obviously well written, one of the best I've read in fact but the thing is; it deserves a sequel. There is so much opportunity left unexplored and personally I would love to have you continue it. If you will please oh please continue this masterpiece. I'd love to see it finished.

-CJ