All Comments on 'The Home Depot'

This story got my attention and got me going, Very erotic and suspenseful story, can't wait to see more from this author A++

""Whispered three words"" **Together forever**<<<< is only two words --- where is the other word.?

Other than that it is a kinda spooky little story ~~ in a way.! LOL

I quite enjoyed the story, but the technical errors are very distracting. Feel free to message me for proofreading in the future; I'd love to get a sneak peek at your next work!