by Miltone
i liked the way you prepared the sex scene rather than race right into it. And the sex itself was well described...very hot!!
"To be continued...." So the author informs the reader in this latest chapter of the great love story of Holly and David. Unfortunately, this story, easily the author's best, has NOT been continued. As far as this chapter is concerned, it is up the standards of previous chapters in the story, although the love scene is too short as is.