All Comments on 'The Honey Trap'

I liked how they turned the tables on Ralph. He got what he deserved!

5

GREAT story!!!!! 5 stars from here!!!

Interesting story. Liked how they dealt with Ralph.

Pretentious and condescending. Hated it.

Ralph deserved worse.

You turned what is essentially a very simple set of circumstances (albeit not uncommon ones) into a substantial story with a number of different personalities involved--all of whom you described quite well.

Not sure about the "Fetish" category placement but it doesn't matter--the story was worth reading, although not very erotic (or even mildly so).

Thanks for sharing your creativity. Keep writing.

MLJ

Very nice reading about a couple loyal to each other... was a fun read.

Nice. Thank you.

Un peu tiré par les cheveux cependant assez agréable à lire.

That worked very well indeed. 5*

Pretty long winded.

Great story. A loving and assertive husband who took charge. And s loving and faithful wife who defended her husband and put him first. Suspect even if only the photo arrived, no video, with no warning call, it wouldn't have gone far. Would have stopped at kissing. Maybe worst case second base. And she would have confronted hubby with photo and she would have confessed. Look how she broke down on a two second kiss. Ralph is an asshole.