All Comments on 'The Honeymoon's Over'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
as fun as it was

to read. the pregnancy killed the story. this is so stupid and even in fantasy so bad towards the unborn kid (you have no idea how it is if you find out in your early twenties that your father is not your father and your sister and brother not really your brother and sister)and all that just because of some shit head parents who gave a shit and had no brain. and what for ? a couple minutes of fun? what sick fantasy does somebody have to make another life miserable just for fun? I'll ask you!!!!!!

SatanicSatanistSatanicSatanistalmost 15 years ago
A great hot story

I loved the story. Lenny is my kind of woman.

SambranoSambranoalmost 15 years ago
An Excellent Conclusion

You did it again! I've followed this story from the beginning, and have absolutely fallen in love with Lenny. I hope one day you'll write another adventure about her.

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