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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Short but sweet

Ahh, the accidental sibling wrestling thing. She'd probably notice, but it's just a story, right? Not a bad one, but you need to do a little proofing (affect vs effect, bear vs bare). Keep it up!

bshell47bshell47over 3 years ago
Nice short fantasy

How about another chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Please write a part 2

Hopeful for this to go further

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Interesting variation on several themes. Not sure what to think, but 5 stars.

Tc

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I enjoy writing erotica every so often. I prefer writing, and reading, short stories that appear to be realistic to the reader. Comments are always welcome either through this forum, or email at stlimanika at yahoo.